1.我很感激...
note：出现“感激”，首先反应就是appreciate及其同族词。
Reference:I appreciate...

2.你若不在意的话，...
Reference:If you don't mind,...

3.去...走走
Reference:tour around...

4.浦江商务旅游公司
note：注意其中的旅游的选词
Reference:Pu Jiang Business Travel Campany

5.国家旅游局
note：局不一定要用bureau
Reference:the Chinese National Tourist Administration

6.经...批准的...
Reference:...approved by...

7.在华...
Reference:...in China

8.以...为主要服务对象
Reference:provide services mainly to...

9.公司的宗旨是...
Reference:We operate under the principal of ...

10.促进，改善，发展
Reference:promote,improve,promote

11.（我很高兴）有此机会（来贵公司工作），与中国汽车业的杰出人士合作共事。
note：（1）这里的“合作共事”可以不译，由前面的“工作”统领，用with连接就可以了。（2）“杰出人士”的翻译
Reference:I'm very glad to have the opportunity to work in your company with a group of brilliant people in China's automobile industries.

12....多年来一直盼望...
note：主要是对“盼望”一词的快速反应。
Reference:have been looking forward to ...for many years